tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660656883872249637.post4086578202866011940..comments2023-07-03T09:59:40.514+01:00Comments on My Writers Block: Some stuff I wroteWriters Blockhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05869590863392956385noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660656883872249637.post-73177627295732761002009-01-06T03:10:00.000+00:002009-01-06T03:10:00.000+00:00Your writing is beautiful and flows so well.http:/...Your writing is beautiful and flows so well.<BR/><BR/>http://momwifesuperhero.comKelliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15840536814259570544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660656883872249637.post-44386750060614147492009-01-05T18:19:00.000+00:002009-01-05T18:19:00.000+00:00excellent work! i look forward to reading more!excellent work! i look forward to reading more!Roberta Glackenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17043096321653226746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660656883872249637.post-55356845578888666082009-01-05T15:33:00.000+00:002009-01-05T15:33:00.000+00:00Thanks folks, your feedback is much appreciated.BR...Thanks folks, your feedback is much appreciated.<BR/><BR/>BRIAN - don't think I'll develop this into anything longer as I think it stands up better with the reader not knowing too much about the characters or their motives. Better to leave them with questions in this case I think.<BR/><BR/>The main aim of this was to get across the character of the narator. The reader should come away knowing more about the narator than they do the characters they are talking about. That's how it was supposed to work anyhow!Writers Blockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05869590863392956385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660656883872249637.post-38565812709915411532009-01-02T07:53:00.000+00:002009-01-02T07:53:00.000+00:00actually, I agree: there's a certain aspect of rea...actually, I agree: there's a certain aspect of realism to it as well, and for me, it sort of struck as being really interesting because of that aspect. Really good! you should keep writing!Lamoinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01349061880558210552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660656883872249637.post-33099937660887674182008-12-30T14:07:00.000+00:002008-12-30T14:07:00.000+00:00I like this. Your story flows and is easy to foll...I like this. Your story flows and is easy to follow along with. You have the foundation for a really good story I think. Will you continue to build this story? I enjoyed reading this.<BR/><BR/>Brian<BR/>http://the-new-author.blogspot.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com